Markhor
[Helmet] [Animal Head]
I think this one turned out great im not yet sure if i missed anything or need to fix anything yet but im hoping you will like!
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Ylva 5 years ago
Markhor status has been set to Needs Review
BluePenguin77 5 years ago
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Ylva 5 years ago
Markhor status has been set to Needs Review
BluePenguin77 5 years ago
Markhor status has been set to Active
Ylva 5 years ago
Markhor status has been set to Needs Review
BluePenguin77 5 years ago
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OneNardBard
Krimstayn@Ylva
haha youre awesome cant wait to make more things in the future :D and im hoping everything gets accepted too :P
The Goat is Great :D Seriously looking good, im so happy with the way he turned out, well done :D
Im also happy you stopped by and participated in the contest! Dont worry about grammar, its not like mine english is anywhere near being perfect :)
Happy to approve and hoping to see all them all accepted :)
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siixxx
Etaew@Ylva
haha Hey sry for all the miss haps :P ok so i think i sized it correctly and fixed the colors as well i hope its all good now! i wont be able to edit again because ill be really busy but ill still be able to reply and this is my last Hat i will be making for the Animal hat thing until next time! so im hoping its all set and done :P. sorry if i have terrible grammar rn im sooo sleepy haha
Hello again :)
Yeah thats why i try to do edits, im not all to great with words and things tend to get lost in translations too x)
Honestly, great job! Im very fond new horns and the red line, it brings in color and life and gave me (what i think to be) and interesting idea :)
But first things first. Sadly it seems that your design is a bit longer than the template. You think you could shrink down length of the face a bit? Light grey square is outline of template matrix if i match APs on it and your model. Beard getting ouf of the dimensions too but im not sure how to deal with that without removing it completely :(
With the red line, i do want to keep that, but may be on face instead of the neck? On neck it could be interpreted as a cut with blood visible (even though its not intended like that at all), and we definitely dont want that since blood not something that can be in family-friendly Trove.
Image of edited version with shorter face, red line on the face, a bit brighter color on horns to highlight them and smoother coloring on cheeks. Not sure about the grey spreading further, could be weird.
Figured id try to explain what i mean by 'smooth'. Left version has basic colors, red line, brown cheeks and grey nose line. On the right version i added middle colors, which makes transaction between colors less bumpy. Its not always the best way to go, contrast can be a great thing too! You did awesome job on nose line and horns, but your coloring on the sides still looks a bit messy >_<
One last coloring push for a handsome goat's sake?
Sergetoo
El_Wea@Ylva
Not sure what you ment by smoothing XD but i did the best i could in what i think you meant by smoothing. i also have it a Dark brown redish hair color i think it looks amazing! made the horns just like u said and also gave the grey line down its face more pop! im eager to hear back from you!!!
Dikoz@Ylva
hahah ty and im always glad to hear your take on fixing colors and shapes! ill take what you said and see what i can come up with :D be back soon :P and yea i did try and make twisted horns but it was not going well haha!
Hello!
This goat is great :O You captured the eyes and face shape + beard extremely well!
Were you going for twisted horns? The shape is getting there but they do look rather thin and busy at the moment. Plus, we do have deer with big antlers that shares similar brownish color pallet, may be to enforce the 'farm goat' feel they could be short and straight?
You are getting better and better with coloring too! I like color choices, but may be it could be a bit more smooth on cheeks and backside? The straight grey line could also have some half-grey shades on the sides of it :)
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