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Ylva Creations Team

March,08 2020 20:22

Hello again :)

Yeah thats why i try to do edits, im not all to great with words and things tend to get lost in translations too x)

Honestly, great job! Im very fond new horns and the red line, it brings in color and life and gave me (what i think to be) and interesting idea :)

But first things first. Sadly it seems that your design is a bit longer than the template. You think you could shrink down length of the face a bit? Light grey square is outline of template matrix if i match APs on it and your model. Beard getting ouf of the dimensions too but im not sure how to deal with that without removing it completely :(

With the red line, i do want to keep that, but may be on face instead of the neck? On neck it could be interpreted as a cut with blood visible (even though its not intended like that at all), and we definitely dont want that since blood not something that can be in family-friendly Trove.

Image of edited version with shorter face, red line on the face, a bit brighter color on horns to highlight them and smoother coloring on cheeks. Not sure about the grey spreading further, could be weird.

Figured id try to explain what i mean by 'smooth'. Left version has basic colors, red line, brown cheeks and grey nose line. On the right version i added middle colors, which makes transaction between colors less bumpy. Its not always the best way to go, contrast can be a great thing too! You did awesome job on nose line and horns, but your coloring on the sides still looks a bit messy >_<

One last coloring push for a handsome goat's sake?