Rarebird Arrowhead

[Spear] [Jurassic Jungle]

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2 weeks ago

by onigiry Home Files Download ZIP

you’re very lucky to get this rare bird, strange, but a spear is its only use.

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Creation Status Changed to Added
by Ylva October 13, 2021

Congratulations! Your creation has been added to Trove - A very Rare Bird!

It can be found in collections under Styles > Spears > Jurassic Jungle.

Creation Status Changed to Rewarded
by ActualPostCard September 20, 2021
Creation Status Changed to Accepted
by ActualPostCard September 20, 2021
Creation Status Changed to Approved
by Ylva December 8, 2019

Well done :D

Happy to approve Version 3.

For future reference, please remember to name your style blueprints with StyleType_StyleName[CreatorsName].blueprint, so spear_Rarebird_Arrowhead[onigiry].blueprint  (dont worry, i renamed this one already)

Creation Status Changed to Needs Review
by onigiry December 8, 2019
Creation Status Changed to Active
by Ylva December 8, 2019

Shape adjustments look great! One tiny thing, dont you think that those two light brown voxels on the belly look a bit weird? I think bird could look more complete if you make a distinct difference between its back and belly. Something like this may be? 

Creation Status Changed to Needs Review
by onigiry December 7, 2019
Creation Status Changed to Active
by Ylva December 7, 2019

Hi there :)

Its a fun design, i like the dangerous coloring that bird has :D

Few technical moments, you are using correct overall dimensions, but the attachment point is located closer to end than it should be. Plus the pommel is much bigger than allowed 3x3x3 and front (bird) part is 1 voxel longer too, those would need to be fixed.

Left is your spear, right is spear template for comparison.

Further, both wings are corner connected and belly of a bird is very flat, so may be give it some weight and connect the wings at the same time?

Did you make it so the shaft and pommel represent the birds tail? Wooden colors around the grip feel a bit out of place in that case. Also may be a voxel or two around the birds bottom to make the transaction between body and tail a bit smoother? 

Lastly, all material maps should contain attachment point, else the game would not know where to apply them within the model, your Type mapping is missing one.

Going to set this one back to Active while you work on it a bit more, dont forget to change its status once you ve made changes :)

Creation Status Changed to Needs Review
by onigiry December 6, 2019
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Created 2 years ago

Updated 2 weeks ago

Rewarded 1 month ago

This creation has been Accepted by the Trove Developers, it will be added to the game.

The author of this Creation has been Rewarded by the Trove Developers.

Added 2 weeks ago

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Rarebird Arrowhead status has been set to Added

Ylva 2 weeks ago

Rarebird Arrowhead status has been set to Rewarded

ActualPostCard 1 month ago

Rarebird Arrowhead status has been set to Accepted

ActualPostCard 1 month ago

Rarebird Arrowhead status has been set to Approved

Ylva 2 years ago

Rarebird Arrowhead status has been set to Needs Review

onigiry 2 years ago

Rarebird Arrowhead status has been set to Active

Ylva 2 years ago

Rarebird Arrowhead status has been set to Needs Review

onigiry 2 years ago

Rarebird Arrowhead status has been set to Active

Ylva 2 years ago

Rarebird Arrowhead status has been set to Needs Review

onigiry 2 years ago