Rarebird Arrowhead

Ylva Creations Team

October,13 2021 20:34

Congratulations! Your creation has been added to Trove - A very Rare Bird!

It can be found in collections under Styles > Spears > Jurassic Jungle.

Ylva Creations Team

December,08 2019 18:29

Well done :D

Happy to approve Version 3.

For future reference, please remember to name your style blueprints with StyleType_StyleName[CreatorsName].blueprint, so spear_Rarebird_Arrowhead[onigiry].blueprint  (dont worry, i renamed this one already)

Ylva Creations Team

December,08 2019 12:24

Shape adjustments look great! One tiny thing, dont you think that those two light brown voxels on the belly look a bit weird? I think bird could look more complete if you make a distinct difference between its back and belly. Something like this may be? 

Ylva Creations Team

December,07 2019 13:04

Hi there :)

Its a fun design, i like the dangerous coloring that bird has :D

Few technical moments, you are using correct overall dimensions, but the attachment point is located closer to end than it should be. Plus the pommel is much bigger than allowed 3x3x3 and front (bird) part is 1 voxel longer too, those would need to be fixed.

Left is your spear, right is spear template for comparison.

Further, both wings are corner connected and belly of a bird is very flat, so may be give it some weight and connect the wings at the same time?

Did you make it so the shaft and pommel represent the birds tail? Wooden colors around the grip feel a bit out of place in that case. Also may be a voxel or two around the birds bottom to make the transaction between body and tail a bit smoother? 

Lastly, all material maps should contain attachment point, else the game would not know where to apply them within the model, your Type mapping is missing one.

Going to set this one back to Active while you work on it a bit more, dont forget to change its status once you ve made changes :)