Valimere
Hi, this is my first creation! Thank you for checking it out and please give me some feedback:)
Ylva
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Hello again!
Slightly bigger bone looks better, good job! I cant say that this is the amount of Epic i was expecting, but i believe the staff did gain a certain appeal :)
It seems you still have some of those corner-connected voxels in the model, those do need to be fixed before we could proceed any further.
Changing status back to Active for now, please make sure Troxel is showing you 'All Tests Passed!" before sending it for Review :)
Hello and welcome!
Sorry for the delayed response.
Staff looks really neat, nice color choices :) Very well made for a for a first creation!
The only technical issue as of now seems to be some corner-connected voxels, meaning in the back of your staff there is a group of voxels that does not have a solid connection to the rest of the model.
When you are viewing your model in Troxel on the right side panel you can find Lint and Export button. Selecting type of your model and clicking it will highlight all the technical issues, if there are any.
Some other moments that you might want to do something about:
- it feels like some of those purple blocks could look even prettier in game if they were glowing. That can be achieved with Material Maps , give them a try :)
- staff might be a little bit too short to correctly display Radiant Auras, could be worth it to increase the distance between Attachment Point (pink voxel where hand holds the weapon) and the tip of the staff just a little bit.
- staff might come across as a bit too simple, may be you could think of something to make it stand out and feel somewhat more Epic? That said, minimalistic designs have their charm too.
I am going to change the status of your creation to Active for now, change it back to Needs Review if you upload changes. If you d rather create something completely different, set this one to Draft, that will hide it from the list and free up a creation slot.
In any case, good luck!
