Venomous Fly

[Bow] [Geode Topside]

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by Marzes May 23, 2020
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by Ylva May 22, 2020
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3 days ago

Hello!

Im so happy to see this bow again, very interesting color combination and shape, and you did good job on refining it :)

Latest Troxel link at the moment complains about alpha-on-solid-voxels, meaning you have some voxels mapped on Alpha but not mapped as glass/glowing glass/tiled glass on Type. Your Alpha map alone (in troxel) looks good, but if i try to download it, it shows 6 voxels that are mapped Glowing colored with transparency on Alpha map. Could you please make sure there are correct files uploaded to Troxel?

Another thing, im absolutely fond of new design, its fresh and clean, but those two pink 'sticks' look somewhat out of place. May be they would fit in better if they were a bit thicker?

Hoping to see it back on Review soon!

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by Marzes May 22, 2020
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by Marzes May 12, 2020
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by Ylva May 12, 2020

Hello again :)

Awesome bow! Im loving vivid colors and unusual combination, looks curious and very unusual :D

Shape is really interesting too, but i think it could be refined just a little bit to give more refined look to the design. At the moment you have some busy areas and parts with crimson color blend in with orange-red elements. Giving each part its own 'slice' and/or some space could make model cleaner and easier to admire :) 

Also it would seem you are using automated gradient tool for shading? Its not a bad thing, but it creates shades of colors that are barely seen to the eye and yet add a whole lot to total voxel count. Hand-painted models usually work best.

Hoping to see this one again on review!

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by Marzes May 9, 2020
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