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Commented on DrownFish Melee creation
Ylva Creations Team
May,26 2024 14:26

Hello o/

What a great idea for a sword, i love it. Good job on the Material maps too!

Everything seem to be correct from a technical side, but i have a couple of color-related suggestions that i believe might help to sell the concept.

Currently there are quite a few shades of orange color, but they are very hard to see - it feels as if the whole fish had just one Orange, one white and one black color. If some of those Orange colors were closer to Red and some others closer to Yellow - it would be easier to tell them apart and so tell the difference between the back and the belly of the fish.

Also, it might be worth it to simplify the shape of the head. Blocky shapes tend to work better in Trove. A bit more volume (of orange voxels) around the eye would help with separating it from the black stripe.

Quick edit to show what i mean:

 

Im going to change the status of this creation to Active for now, but hoping to see it back on Review!