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Ylva Creations Team

April,27 2020 13:48

Hello again!

Good to see the progress! Uneven ribs look lovely, and while the rib near the head creates a bit of an empty space there i think its good and adds some uniqueness to the fish :)

However, your sword no longer seems to fit in 9x9x35 dimensions. Those are set around the Attachment point, so moving that closer to the front sadly wont give more room in the back. Plus the top bits of ribs now poke out of the allowed frame.

Another thing, your Troxel link somehow complains about Alpha mapping, while there are no glass blocks on the design. Could you please make sure there is a clean version uploaded?

You can easily check for technical issues, if there are any, with Lint and Export button in Troxel. Load your model in, pick the type of your style and click on it, that will highlight anything that is out of order.

Last but not least, it seems like you made the shades or grey more contrast? On the original design they were smooth and created a nice texture of some aged fish bone. With the way they currently are the colors feel much more messy. I believe it would be worth it to clean up those too, going for hand-painted and thought through coloring (brighter on exposed to light parts, darker where the shadows falls) instead of what seems to be random.

Changing status to Active for now, but please do set it back to Review when ready again :)