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Hello!

Sword looks interesting, i like the color choices and idea!

However, there are over 900 various sword designs already in game so all newly approved swords have to be unique and extraordinary. While your sword is good, i think it could be spiced up a bit more to give it more chance to attract attention.

Im mostly concerned about all those repetitive elements on the blade part, its usually best to avoid busy shapes. Also since you are aiming for Permafrost, may be some icicles on the blade could enforce the impression? Another thing, rounded eye feels as rather commonly seen shape, may be it could be at least squared up a bit to make it look more unique?

Based on your model i tried couple of things just to see how it could look, its very far from being perfect though. Not in any case you need to copy it, just hoping it could help you pick a direction for improvements :)

Going to set status of this one to Active for now, set it back to Needs Review if you upload any changes to the model :) If you d rather work on something completely different you could set status to Draft, that will free up a creation slot for another style and hide this one from the public list of Active.

In any case, good luck!