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Ylva Creations Team

March,06 2020 19:33

Hello again!

Sorry for the delay.

Shading and color looks better, i very much like the square spot you added on top, may be some more of those could really brighten up the pattern. That >>> coloring i suggested on first review is far from being a perfect one, im sure you can do better than that. Good job on fixing the attachment point too.

However, it looks like shape is exactly the same? Im sorry but im not sold on it :( Ofcourse i could approve anything in any condition, but then its much less likely that Trove dev team will chose such creations to add in game. Im pretty sure snake could be much cuter and Trovian than it is at the moment. 

Even though snakes have very simple pipe-shape, they do have distinct head/chin, especially when they are 'sitting straight'. On your snake you are filling that whole space behind orange line with voxels, making the neck very thick. I believe that needs to be altered for snake to look right.

Next, it seems you are using full allowed height. May be it would be easier to shape snakes head if there was less neck? On the image below i highlighted the line where helmet could already end + squished version (VERY rough edit, dont quote me using this one haha).

Back to active, please do something about that neck.