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I think the article is pretty good as is. However, the title doesn't really relate to what the article is about in my opinion. It's called a builder's club spotlight, but only really focuses on Evilgician and what he's done in the community, which may be to set up future articles he writes, I'm not sure if thats the case though. Also another thing that might be nice is instead of showing all the pictures at the end of the little paragraph, maybe after talking about a build, show it, then move on with the paragraph.  That might make it a bit choppy though.

As for clubs/builds you should check out, my club, /joinworld The Shoe Eaters, has a jurassic park themed build. While it was originally made for the dino tamer building contest, something went wrong and I think they judged only 1 part of the build and because of it, my build didn't do well. To get there, you can take the yellow portal located around spawn and then take the red portal from there.