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Voted: Neon Ninja

wait wait hold on. ITS FOR MACS TOO. HOLY CRAP! 

Only one submission?

He started his day sitting upright. Darkness. Fear. They were all that seemed to keep him company.

As he adjusted, he could start to guess were he was. He began to notice the warmth and comforting crackles of a fire nearby. A wall stood infront of him with an opening to the left. He was in some sort of multi-roomed cave. He also began to notice a disturbing sticky feeling of frosting that seemed to latch itself to his leather coat. According to his everyday life before this event, this was very, unusual. He was a Dino Tamer, who settled to the state Trove.

The sticky substance made it hard to move, but he managed to stand. He looked around, panic starting to wedge itself into his mind. He didnt know were he was and how he got thier, and part of him didnt want to know. He began to walk towards the wall ahead of him, hoping to peek around the corner and find himself alone. But he wasn't.

Breathing. Slow and steady. Coming from behind the wall. He finally peeked over the side of the wall that concealed the fire and the thing alive on the other side. Slowly he knelt down. Keeping quiet. Listening.

As soon as as he had leaned in enough to get a view of the other said of the wall. Eyes. Dark as the feeling of dread he had as he ended up mysteriously in this place. He stumbled back.

     He started his new day sitting upright. Darkness. Fear. They were all that seemed to keep him company.

     As his eyes adjusted and he can start to have a guess of were he was, he began to notice the warmth and comforting crackles of a fire nearby.  A wall stood infront of him with a small opening to the left, light seeping through. Above him, a ceiling stood 2 feet above his head. He was in some sort of multi-roomed cave. He also began to notice a disturbing sticky feeling of frosting that seemed to latch itself to the fibers of his leather coat. According to his everyday life before this event, this was very, very unusual. He was a Dino Tamer, from the southern coast of Welchville. A city far away from the state Trove wich he and his fellow beings settled not to long ago. Trove was a very different place but safer. As he thought until now.

     The sticky substance made it hard to move as it hardened on his coat, but he managed to stand upright. He looked around   , panic starting to wedge itself into his mind. He didnt know were he was and how he got thier, and part of him didnt want to know why. He began to walk towards the wall directly ahead of him, hoping to peek around the corner and find himself alone. But he was wrong.

     Breathing. Slow and steady. Coming from behind the wall. He began to shiver, even though the fire was even closer now. He finaly forced himself to peek over the side of the wall that concealed the fire and the thing alive on the other side. Slowly he knelt down. Keeping quiet. Listening.

     As soon as as he had leaned in enough to get a view of the other said of the wall. Eyes. Dark. Dark as the feeling of dread he had as he ended up mysteriously in this place. He stumbled back. Fear of the thing grabbing hold of him and ending hid life, but no. It stood there. And the fear he had had before slipped away. It was a creature he had not seen before. Its eyes dark, but having an apperance of choclate, frosting, and edible delitghts. It was ironic though. The thing he thought was to devour him, was things he would devour back at home. Completley ironic.

And uh.. mac users still dont work? :'(

 Great use of shading and placement of items that made it an overall creepy feel. I think its great, how the rain didnt cover up to much and gave the feel a really nice boost. Good job Lushie!

Voted: Neon Ninja

Seems like a drawing that can have a lot of really neat effects and backgrounds that would make it a good drawing!