Corrupted Sun Staff
[Staff] [Geode Topside]
Corrupted Sun Staff status has been set to Approved
Ylva 2 months ago
Corrupted Sun Staff status has been set to Needs Review
BPsysOri 2 months ago
Corrupted Sun Staff status has been set to Active
Ylva 2 months ago
Corrupted Sun Staff status has been set to Needs Review
BPsysOri 2 months ago
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Hello again!
Version 2 looks so much better, good job!
Approved.
For the future uploads, please upload a Blueprint of your creation to the Files tab - its next to Edit, Images etc. Having a blueprint there allows Developers to quickly download, check and add creation to the game files.
The blueprint should be named according to a patter that all the other in-game files use:
creationtype_creationname[CreatorsName].blueprint
so in your case - staff_corrupted_sunstaff[BPsysOri].blueprint
That name in square brackets will be the name that gets displayed in a Designed By: field. so please always make sure that it is spelled correct. This name should also match your Trovesaurus name AND your in-game character name - if it does not, the Developers will not be able to find your account and send rewards when creation gets Accepted.
Dont worry, this time i ve uploaded a blueprint for you, made from your latest Troxel link files.
Hi there!
The staff idea sounds awesome, loving the combination of Undertow and Sunseeker themes!
It looks like the parts of the model are not actually connected to each other, please be sure to make the whole model as one single piece. Adding one voxel over here would connect the shaft to the head of the staff:
You dont have to wait for a Review to check something like this. Troxel has an automated function to check the style models for technical issues. Open your model in Troxel, find the TroveCreations on the right sidebar, chose the type of your creation and hit the button - it will highlight all the issues, if there are any.
Also, the current design is looking rather simple. While there can be beauty in simplicity, i believe this idea could use some more details to highlight and sell the idea better.
I would suggest giving the Undertow (dark green) part some color variation and the crystals that all the geodian monsters have - purple, orange and green. It could also be good to add a bit more volume to the tentacles on the front part and the end of the shaft.
May be something like this:
Ofc you do not have to copy my edit, im sure you can think of something that would work best for your design :)
I am going to change the status of your creation to Active for now, please set it back to Needs Review if you upload any changes!