Drilling platform
[Dungeon (1 Star)] [Geode Topside]
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#1107 Entrance_vara.blueprint July 8, 2020 Download
#1096 Entrance_vara.blueprint OLD July 8, 2020 Download
#1088 Entrance_vara.blueprint OLD July 8, 2020 Download
#1109 Entrance_varb.blueprint July 8, 2020 Download
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#1105 Entrance_varc.blueprint July 8, 2020 Download
#1092 Entrance_varc.blueprint OLD July 8, 2020 Download
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#1108 bossroom_vara.blueprint July 8, 2020 Download
#1100 bossroom_vara.blueprint OLD July 8, 2020 Download
#1086 bossroom_vara.blueprint OLD July 8, 2020 Download
#1102 bossroom_varb.blueprint July 8, 2020 Download
#1098 bossroom_varb.blueprint OLD July 8, 2020 Download
#1084 bossroom_varb.blueprint OLD July 8, 2020 Download
#1103 bossroom_varc.blueprint July 8, 2020 Download
#1095 bossroom_varc.blueprint OLD July 8, 2020 Download
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#1110 drillingplatform_varall.dungeon July 8, 2020 Download
#1097 drillingplatform_varall.dungeon OLD July 8, 2020 Download
#1089 drillingplatform_varall.dungeon OLD July 8, 2020 Download
#1106 passage_vara.blueprint July 8, 2020 Download
#1094 passage_vara.blueprint OLD July 8, 2020 Download
#1083 passage_vara.blueprint OLD July 8, 2020 Download
#1101 passage_varb.blueprint July 8, 2020 Download
#1099 passage_varb.blueprint OLD July 8, 2020 Download
#1082 passage_varb.blueprint OLD July 8, 2020 Download
#1104 passage_varc.blueprint July 8, 2020 Download
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#1085 passage_varc.blueprint OLD July 8, 2020 Download
Drilling platform status has been set to Active
Ylva 5 years ago
Drilling platform status has been set to Needs Review
Igis_Whitebeard 5 years ago
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Hello!
Sorry for the delayed review.
First of all, wow, this is a very impressive dungeon design. Great job on variations and material mapping, looks great! All technical things like plugs and portals are absolutely correct too, well done :D
There are some moments that i believe could use a bit more love though.
- Some variations of assembled dungeon have middle pipe misaligned, and while it doesnt serve functional purpose it would still be better to have it align.
- passage_varb.blueprint room has two cylindrical buildings that are connected with bridge without floor, if players with 2 jumps fall down from there or inside the second building they are going to have really hard time getting back up. Some jumping platforms here and there or extra doorways could solve this.
- boss rooms look good, but if you connected all those rock formations to walls and hid the box sides the rooms would look much more natural and refined.
Aside from that, we ve just had another user post a geode topside dungeon (that got approved some days ago) which had similar shapes and structures. I mean cylinder and 3-store rectangular buildings in this one https://trovesaurus.com/creation=268/old-storage-invaded-by-young-leviathan. While it might be far-fetched reference and yes indeed those two are quite basic shapes i would still suggest to go with more unique designs.
It is not forbidden in any case to create dungeons that have matching looks and themes, that is more or less unavoidable within same biome, but i would rather not have a situation where one user can complain that someone else used their designs and got a dungeon with them in game instead of original creator. Hope you understand.
In any case, you ve done a great job on this dungeon already and with just a bit more effort it would be a truly great addition to Geode Topside :) Looking forward to seeing it on Review again!
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