Drilling platform
[Dungeon (1 Star)] [Geode Topside]
Hi,
this is my first creation.
It is a 1-star dungeon for Geode topside biome.
Rules taken into consideration:
New comer friendly, everything can be done within 2 jumps
3 rooms with 3 variants each
Total dimensions: 39x39x90
Entrance should be quite visible, path should be unambigous..
Boss room has enough room to fight.
Exit portal is in bossroom and leads to portal in passage room.
5 NPC spawn points in each room.
Colour pallet of Geode used
I would appreciate if you could review it and provide me your feedback on eventual points to improve.
Have a nice day,
Igis_Whitebeard
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Ylva 5 years ago
Drilling platform status has been set to Needs Review
Igis_Whitebeard 5 years ago
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Hello!
Sorry for the delayed review.
First of all, wow, this is a very impressive dungeon design. Great job on variations and material mapping, looks great! All technical things like plugs and portals are absolutely correct too, well done :D
There are some moments that i believe could use a bit more love though.
- Some variations of assembled dungeon have middle pipe misaligned, and while it doesnt serve functional purpose it would still be better to have it align.
- passage_varb.blueprint room has two cylindrical buildings that are connected with bridge without floor, if players with 2 jumps fall down from there or inside the second building they are going to have really hard time getting back up. Some jumping platforms here and there or extra doorways could solve this.
- boss rooms look good, but if you connected all those rock formations to walls and hid the box sides the rooms would look much more natural and refined.
Aside from that, we ve just had another user post a geode topside dungeon (that got approved some days ago) which had similar shapes and structures. I mean cylinder and 3-store rectangular buildings in this one https://trovesaurus.com/creation=268/old-storage-invaded-by-young-leviathan. While it might be far-fetched reference and yes indeed those two are quite basic shapes i would still suggest to go with more unique designs.
It is not forbidden in any case to create dungeons that have matching looks and themes, that is more or less unavoidable within same biome, but i would rather not have a situation where one user can complain that someone else used their designs and got a dungeon with them in game instead of original creator. Hope you understand.
In any case, you ve done a great job on this dungeon already and with just a bit more effort it would be a truly great addition to Geode Topside :) Looking forward to seeing it on Review again!
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