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Ylva Creations Team

December,11 2023 22:39

Hi there!

Whoa, you did a very good job with your very first creation :D The model works well and you used the Material Maps! Very nice.

We do have over 900 various melee styles in game, so all the new ones need to be really unique and glorious. You did get the Unique part right already - we definitely do not have bats like this one :) I have a couple of suggestions that might help with refining the design.

At the moment, the design feels a bit repetitive - making some parts thicker and/or giving them a different shape could really help with this.

Also, Its usually a good thing if a style matches an existing theme - yours comes pretty close to Infineon - Candy Barbarian for example - https://trovesaurus.com/collections/skin/candybarbarian_infineon/troxel . The Infineon has more than one shade of purple, and this color change helps to spice things up!

So i would suggest to add just a bit more color (shades of purple leaning towards pink, for example) and make some of the stripes different from the others. I ve made a quick edit just to show what i mean - i hope it will give you some ideas.

Im going to change the status of this creation to Active for now, but please dont forget to change it back to Needs Review!