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Ylva Creations Team

July,23 2023 16:50

Hi there!

Sorry for a delay.

The gun is looking good! I really like how the filling is getting squished out of it :) 

There is a one tiny moment that needs to be fixed before i could approve this design - the placement of Attachment Point is just a tiny bit too high - most of the gun need to be 'above' the hand. You can fix this by moving the AP just one block back on Z (second model), but that would mean that there is a gap between a hand and a gun so it might be reasonable to fill the gap with more pastry (third model).

You can use Troxel to automatically check for issues like this. Find the Trove Creations widget on the right side bar, chose the type of your creation and hit Lint and Export button - this will highlight all technical issues if there are any.

Another thing, it could be good to add some more volume to the gun. There is tiny bit more room available that could be used to make the model slightly rounded. Something along these lines may be, what do you think? 

I believe a model with slightly rounded sides reads better as 'food' compared to perfectly rectangular shape.

Im going to change to status of this one to Active for now, please set it back to Review once you fix the AP placement :)