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Ylva Creations Team

October,25 2022 09:31

Hello!

My oh my, what a staff :D I absolutely love those asymmetrical double 'blades', the colors work so well together and the material maps are right on point. Seriously, well done! 

There are a couple of moments that i would like to mention before i could approve it though:

- You are using the 255.0.0 (color for the Glowing on Type material map) as a color for the two most red blocks on the main qb. Could you please adjust that to be anything else that isnt used as a map? Even the 250.0.0 would work. Having the material map colors on the main qb should not cause any serious issues, but its better to be safe.

- It might be reasonable to give more space to the area around the Attachment Point. Some costumes use bulkier hand models, and allowing for more room would ensure that they look good too. Costumes that have noticeable overlap in that area: Bee Trickster, Tricksy Bat, Sakura Sage, Partisan Pinatrician (this one has worst clipping, but in all honesty i doubt someone would purposely use these two together), Woeful Wisdom and Nefarious Nekomancer

- A very minor detail, but one of the blades has a very fragile connection. It could be good to add an extra voxel or two to make it look supported:

Im going to change to status of this one to Active for now. Set it back to Needs Review once you upload an updated model. Hoping to see it again soon!

In case you would prefer to create something completely different - you could set Active creation to Draft - that would free up a slot for something else.

Good luck!