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Hello!

Sorry for the delay.

Spear looks very nice, i love the way blade is made, quite an unusual and promising design :D Overall, this is very well made spear for the first attempt, good job!

For the shaft and the pommel though, a simplistic spear with wooden shaft and red ribbon was recently approved and was already added to Pts server couple of weeks ago (this one > https://trovesaurus.com/creation=89/glaive-of-the-spire , same name in game) I think it would be best to make sure your design is as unique as it can be. May be some other wood color/pattern would do?

About coloring, it is better to avoid repeated 1 dark - 1 light voxel coloration, while it looks alright on the model, in game it would look too busy. Also, its good to have some colors to spice-up the looks, but at the moment there are blue and green sparks only in the pommel, without being seen anywhere else they feel somewhat out of place.

You might also want to use some Material Maps, to add some shine to metal parts.

Last but not least, it is also required to have in-game screenshot or two of your creation being used by appropriate class, please add those before sending it to review again :)

Going to set status of your creation to Active for now, set it back to Review if you upload new version. If you would rather create something completely different, you could set status to Draft, that will remove creation from list of Active ones and will free up a slot for other creation.

In any case, good luck!