Burning ice

[Melee] [Forbidden Spires]

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4 years ago

by APG33 Home Files

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Created 4 years ago

Updated 4 years ago

Active 4 years ago
This Creation is Active and is being worked on.
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Burning ice status has been set to Active

Ylva 4 years ago

Burning ice status has been set to Needs Review

APG33 4 years ago

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Burning ice status has been set to Active

Hello and welcome!

Your sword design looks interesting, i like the unusual blade shape!

However, there are over 900 melee styles in game, so i do have to be most strict on Sword reviews. While you creation does look interesting, i think it could use some more love.

For starts, you set the biome to Forbidden Spires, how does you design fit in there? Its quite important to have the looks match the biome theme so players would be able to look at the design and safely assume that 'Oh, this one can be found in Forbidden Spires!'

If we try to play from the name you ve given it, Burning Ice would rather fit in Dragonfire or may be even Permafrost.

What im trying to say, it would be great if you could adjust the design so it would easily read as something specific. Also, at the moment sword feels quite plastic (bright colors), may be some Material Maps could help with making it ice (glass) or fire (glowing).

Going to set status of your creation to Active for now, set it back to Needs Review if you upload some changes to your model :) If you d rather work on something completely different, you could set status to Draft, that will free up a creation slot for another style.

In any case, good luck!

Burning ice status has been set to Needs Review