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Envenomed Impaler Spear creation
this could use some improvement.
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For example, i don't like how the venom is placed. I think it should be inside the snake's mouth, rather than on the tip of the tongue.
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And some depth could really enhance it.
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And also material maps could use some more work. If the yellow parts are meant to be gold, you should try putting a water specular map on the gold parts, so that they look glossier.
I actually whipped up a design for the changes I suggested, but it is not letting me upload them here.
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For example, i don't like how the venom is placed. I think it should be inside the snake's mouth, rather than on the tip of the tongue.
.
And some depth could really enhance it.
.
And also material maps could use some more work. If the yellow parts are meant to be gold, you should try putting a water specular map on the gold parts, so that they look glossier.
I actually whipped up a design for the changes I suggested, but it is not letting me upload them here.