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Commented on Eggshell contest - Sakura Egg - Shell 1/5 Dungeon (1 Star) creation
Ylva Creations Team
January,10 2022 12:41Hello!
What a beautiful idea for an egg shell. That flower on top is just the best :)
It looks like from technical side you have done a perfect job, shell is of proper size and there are no extra blocks on the inside.
However, i believe your design can highly benefit from some added voxels on the outer side of the eggshell. All those flowers are likely to look much better if the whole flower gets to occupy a flat plane. To quote that part of the rules: you can add extra elements on the shell surface, for example like a bow on the existing shell variation. Such additions must always stay within 39x39z47y.
I made a quick edit based on your shell to show what i mean by a flat plane. That big flower in the center is no longer stretched between layers (left) but instead has its own flat layer (right)
You might also want to make those sakura branches just a tiny bit more 'square', to give them more of a Trovian look.
Lastly - please use the suggested name pattern for the blueprint. In your case that would be eggshell_sakura[HinamoriAmu].blueprint
, instead of sakura_egg.blueprint
. We need that contest prefix to tell that blueprint comes from said contest and the [CreatorsName] in square brackets is necessary to be able to tell which user made which shell.
I am going to change the status of this one to Active, hoping to see it on review again :)