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Commented on Banana's Justice Staff creation
Ylva Creations Team
March,15 2020 10:31Hello again!
Troxel links are what i check and review so they are the main thing. Screenshots you mostly need to 'wow' the devs when they open creation post :)
While it does look alright in game, it also has to work correctly. It seems like you have same overlapping material maps going on, top to bottom .qb, _t, _a and _s :
You did attach the banana, cant argue with that :P However i think there are some more things that can be done to improve the design. At the moment 'shaft' part seems relatively empty, plus using yellow on that and on banana makes it visually harder to tell what you are looking at from the first sight. Trove has so many styles already that its crucial to have all the new ones as refined as possible.
May be if shaft didnt have any yellow/gold on it the banana would be more attractive?
I tried out a few things and came up with design looking like this:
Im not convinced that squished qubes really fit, but they do add some unusual vibe. Bigger and 'plugged in' banana gives it move value and adds a sense of 'complete' feeling.
You dont have to copy that design at all, just hoping it could give you some direction for your own adjustments :)
Please double check all material maps in your Troxel before sending it to review again. Also, you can upload more images to the post itself, Images button next to Edit.