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Commented on Fish Head Helmet creation
Ylva Creations Team
March,10 2020 22:39

Hello!

Sorry for delay.

Your goldfish looks awesome! Great color choices and those eyes are so fishy haha, well done :D

For the contest itself your creation works perfectly, but if you wish to get it approved and hopefully accepted by Dev team id suggest to adjust couple of things.

While the shape you are using is closer to real fish shape, it could be good to make it less busy and more blocky. It might also be nice to make a fin on top less thick, and may be even use some material maps on it, to make it glass. That should enforce overall 'fish' looks.

About coloring, the colors you used are bright clean and contrasting, i love them! However, they seem to be placed in diagonals, which doesnt look all too natural. Were you aiming for scales? It might be better to skip that and make coloring more smooth. Gills are great, but they would stand out more if their color was not used right next to them :P

I ve made a quick edit based on your model and suggestions above (with a sudden tail added, but may be you d like that idea). You dont have to copy it 1:1, but may be it will help you decide on adjustments :)

Going to change status of creation to Active for now, change it back to Review if you upload new version!