Eggshell Contest - Penguin- 2/5

[Dungeon (1 Star)] [Permafrost]

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its gettin cold and its a penguin 

 

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Created 8 months ago

Updated 8 months ago

Active 8 months ago

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Eggshell Contest - Penguin- 2/5 status has been set to Active

Ylva 8 months ago

Eggshell Contest - Penguin- 2/5 status has been set to Needs Review

Petspark 8 months ago

Eggshell Contest - Penguin- 2/5 status has been set to Active

Petspark 8 months ago

Eggshell Contest - Penguin- 2/5 status has been set to Needs Review

Petspark 8 months ago

Eggshell Contest - Penguin- 2/5 status has been set to Active

Ylva 8 months ago

pegguin status has been set to Needs Review

Petspark 8 months ago

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@Ylva

i had the wrong file uploaded 

 

Creation Status Changed to Active
by Ylva January,30 2022 12:38

Hello!

Thank you for removing extra blocks from the inside, that seems to be working good now :) A little bit of extra shading is a very nice touch, that grey adds so much more volume to the eyes and wings! New placement of feet is great too, they are perfectly visible above the ground.

Although it looks like the entrance now is in the middle of penguins belly?

That is not going to work, all entrances on all shells must be exactly in the same position, else they would not align with other rooms of the dungeon.

Currently the entrance is blocked: 

What i meant by 'not between the legs' is that it could be possible to add some visuals like a penguin egg/fish/stone/bush/anything else that you can come up with that would serve as an etnrance.

There is still a bit of time :)

Creation Status Changed to Needs Review
by Petspark January,28 2022 23:28
Creation Status Changed to Active
by Petspark January,28 2022 22:58
Creation Status Changed to Needs Review
by Petspark January,28 2022 22:57
Creation Status Changed to Active
by Ylva January,28 2022 10:06

Hello :)
That penguin is looking great! You are really good at making face expressions on those animals :D

Unfortunately i can approve this shell right away. There are some added blocks on the bottom part that pierce through the shell. 

The inner side of the shell must remain exactly the same as on provided template qb file, else it will cause issues when dungeon assembles.

Another thing, i really do like those feet but they are placed rather low, so when a dungeon spawns in the world they will get hidden in the ground like this;


You would need to lift them few blocks up if you want them to show. I explained same thing on this creation, if you are interested to see how others approached same problem > https://trovesaurus.com/creation=443/eggshell-contest---egglysia-the-sun-eggodess---15 

Last but not least, while the little tail is totally adorable, im not sure if its the best to place an entrance to the dungeon right under it. Placement between two feet on the front wont really be much less suggestive, but im sure you can come up with a right solution :)

I am going to change the status of this one to Active.
28th of January (today!) is the last day when users can send contest entries for Review!

Creation Status Changed to Needs Review
by Petspark January,28 2022 04:18