Incarnation Of Moonlight

[Staff] [Shadow Dungeon]

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A staff made of moonlight, ebony and silver, that was created as embodiment of the splendor of moon.

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Created 2 weeks ago

Updated 1 week ago

Approved 1 week ago

This Creation was Approved by Creation Moderators and is waiting to be considered by Trove Developers for Acceptance.

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Incarnation Of Moonlight status has been set to Approved

_FutureHero_ 1 week ago

Incarnation Of Moonlight status has been set to Needs Review

dre4ml1ght 1 week ago

Incarnation Of Moonlight status has been set to Active

_FutureHero_ 1 week ago

Incarnation Of Moonlight status has been set to Needs Review

dre4ml1ght 1 week ago

Incarnation Of Moonlight status has been set to Active

dre4ml1ght 1 week ago

Incarnation Of Moonlight status has been set to Draft

dre4ml1ght 1 week ago

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Incarnation Of Moonlight status has been set to Active

_FutureHero_ 1 week ago

Incarnation Of Moonlight status has been set to Needs Review

dre4ml1ght 2 weeks ago

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Creation Status Changed to Approved
by _FutureHero_ August,05 2022 21:59

Thank you for making those changes and it can be easy to miss those small details especially if it's hidden under a layer of glass ^^

Approved!

Creation Status Changed to Needs Review
by dre4ml1ght August,05 2022 21:46

@_FutureHero_

Thanks for tips. I completely forgot about that hole, and I can't figure out how I missed it.
Creation Status Changed to Active
by _FutureHero_ August,05 2022 20:43

Wow! this is definitely standing out more good job, and I'm loving that blue glowing glass by the moon! ^^
I have a few more suggestions to really clean it up before approval.

First would be to fill in the hole in the back of the staff, filling this in gives a more solid feel.

Second would be to make the grip in the middle one block wider on each side so it shows up better with every class holding it.

Last would be to add a few blocks to the top part of the staff making it smoother and solid.




You're doing great with this staff and only a little bit more work to go, back to active for now! ^^

Creation Status Changed to Needs Review
by dre4ml1ght August,04 2022 21:04
Creation Status Changed to Active
by dre4ml1ght August,04 2022 21:04

@_FutureHero_

Thanks for the redesign tips. I really liked your idea with crescents, and after a couple hours of thinking I came to the same idea, so it's implemented. I also added a couple more little things and repainted the crystal at the other end of the staff.
Creation Status Changed to Draft
by dre4ml1ght August,04 2022 21:01
Creation Status Changed to Active
by _FutureHero_ August,04 2022 01:31

Welcome to Creations! And congratulations on properly using material maps on your first creation, those can be a bit tricky to figure out at the beginning! ^^

Now on to the review of your staff.
I think you're trying to match your staff with the Crescent Chloromancer which in that case you can pull the colors directly off the model.

Here are a few of those color hex from the costume
#35FFCA for the green/blue color
#1A1F2D for the darker blue
#EFF5F5 for the silver

About the model itself It's a nice style but it might get lost within the large variety of staff we already have in-game, with some shading and maybe some small shape edits you could be able to make it stand out more. Here are some of my suggestions. ^^

With the top part of the staff you could separate the two crescents a little bit to give it a more unique look while still having them connect with the blue glow.

And to make it more coherent you could add some glass to the front of the staff or a bit more silver around the back crystal.

Here is a quick redesign to  give you some ideas for shading and shape edits

You don't need to use my suggestions but hopefully they help you come up with your own way to give your design more of a spark. 

Last, once you're ready to set it back into review again make sure you post your model's blueprint in the files tab. 

Also make sure your blueprint name is in this format, equipment_weapon_staff_Incarnation_Of_Moonlight[dre4ml1ght]

Setting this back to active for now and hoping to see it again in review! ^^

Creation Status Changed to Needs Review
by dre4ml1ght August,02 2022 18:15